ah, yes i am too often guilty of writing emo poems.
I like to think they are somewhat original.
Very nice. I like the flow of it, although in some places it becomes a bit of a mouthful.

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mmhm mmhm thanks. emo poems can be fun--i would like to try writing a presentable emo poem one day

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"it seems to me most strange that men should fear, seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come."

very nice use of vocabulary. im not a very good poet when it gets down to it. i may have words in my vocabulary that are nice but i never know when to use them. is the poem summed up, be yourself, against norms and standards, and show them who you are, despite what they think? thats what i got but i dont quite know if thats all it means to say. nice job still. ^_^

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98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature

Imma go with a strong anti-god sense on this one, though I may be absolutely wrong...

However, I can understand...my RE teacher doesn't really like talking to me anymore after I gave him a very logical case as to why God didn't exist.

Give me a bit, I'll read it again, and get back to you with something more useful than an anecdote of my day!

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yep--being yourself

--also even if you're categorized under a stereotype, particularly emos, you should articulate what you mean to express differently from the other people that fall under the same category.or something along those lines

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"it seems to me most strange that men should fear, seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come."

lol sorri no anti-god-ness is in this paper =]

BUT--i would like to read your paper, please send it to me somehow.

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"it seems to me most strange that men should fear, seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come."

you mean to be different apart from stereotypes.

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Lol, well, I don't have it written out...but basically what happened was:

"God is good. However there is suffering in the world."
"You're contradicting yourself; if God is good but omnipotent and all-powerful then he would do something about suffering, and since he doesn't, he is cruel. However if God does not know about suffering or can't do anything about it, then he is impotent."
"Err...yes..."

And so the debate continues. Not exactly why he doesn't exist, but it was an interesting argument, nonetheless.

*rubs hands together* Can't wait until we get onto abortion!

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its odd--its like...being different IN the stereotype..oh nvm ><

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"it seems to me most strange that men should fear, seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come."